All Comments on 'A Mother-Daughter Lez Camp'

Fantastic artwork and story as well..where to you find her own profile??

A story about a secret lesbian society of mothers and daughters being taken over by the nerdy sons of the mothers, using videos and pictures to blackmail their way into fucking all of the women in the secret society would be awesome.

amazingly HOT story as always maybe there could be a follow where the men start their own club & enjoy each other as well

Another great story. My daughters and I loved it, just wish the "camp" was real we would love to attend. Little surprised Jasmine that not one mother/daughter wore nylons. Maybe next time. Keep up the great work.

The fabulous combination of steamy words and erotic images makes this a five million star story.

The illustrations in this story are WAY better than the computer-generated 3D ones that you see in many of the stories on Lit. Awesome!

Great story and artwork; wonderful collaboration.

Great art work, not sure all women have 40DD but then it does not matter does it. Thanks!

We enjoyed the story and the artwork tremendously!

This offering has inspired the girls into planning mode. They want to try and host a girls only weekend at our ranch! Knowing Roxy and Bev, they’ll pull it off.

Thanks again Jasmine for your wonderfully creative mind!

Five stars from each of us!!

Luv from

Lance, Roxy and Pet Bev💜💜

Outstanding. Great story. Great artwork. Love all of your stories. This is one of the BEST.

Loved the story and the artwork was fabulous!

Your stories always impress. I would buy a collection of your stories if you had a place to do it.

Well, this was quite an immersive work, definitely over the top and somewhat self indulgent; all of which may have been your goal. You certainly provided a platform on which to showcase your illustrator's work. It was like a modern day description of the mythical Greek island of Lesbos. While honestly, not really my thing, you nevertheless put forth maximum effort, and for that I rewarded you with a score of 4.

I love the various themes (incest, bdsm, pee play) but I see this more of an outline for an erotic series that could be extremely exciting! I miss the teasing, build up, and dialog. The illustrations are ok but I don't need them with the way you normally write. This is a little disappointing, I know you can provide so much more exciting material.

One of THE worst stories I've found on Literotica. It brings down the collective IQ of the vast Literotica audience by at least 100 points.

Already have stories in here exactly like this. Silkstocking is one of the best writers but she either doesnt finish the story or recycles one :(

What happened to the author I once couldn't wait to read? I find myself glancing or skipping over most of what she writes anymore, it's all the same only different. I'm nearly to the point where I ignore what she posts.

Over the top, but isn't that the point?! Of all your many, many illustrated stories, love the collaborations with Rebecca the most.

loved it !!!!!! maybe add some fun in camp infirmary & shaving

This is a story that is full of the writer's random thoughts. The entire story is propped up with the help of the amazing Rebecca, who's artwork is certainly worth a second and a third "dekko". 5 stars for the artwork.

Great premise, but there was waaaaay too much going on. Too many characters, not enough characterization to differentiate them, and too much head hopping to pay attention. It should have been broken up into smaller chapters and vignettes so the reader doesn't get lost.

Despite that criticism, it was hot as always. The sex scenes were blistering and the artwork was gorgeous.

4/5

The daughters may all be lez, but the moms appear to be bi. With the way all the wives look in the illustrations, I can't believe the husbands are not hitting those babes regularly. I was disappointed with your idea of cuckolding. For a few seconds, I thought the husbands would have been tapping the neighborhood wives. Would have been one heck of a bisexual orgy but definitely would not fit in with the story's theme. Despite those issues, it kept me "up" long enough to deserve the 5 stars it received from me. Great as usual, Jas!

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Good luck this summer, oh wait you already are. I had one trick to share with you, It's right on the tip of my tongue "(!)"

Since we have two hole sluts and three hole sluts. I gave 5 stars. Now can I get out of my cage, Mistress, PLEASE.

I prefer that it gets straight to the point. Although there was reason to even include discussion of the men.

Great artwork

But the dialogue all seemed very rushed and non-stop - very little build up to any of the encounters which I found tedious after half-a-dozen pages.

Loved looking at the artwork which was a bigger turn on than the script

I loved this like I have loved all of your stories. Your illustrations never leave anything to the imagination. You always seem to come up with new and very taboo subjects. I would love to see you write a similar illustrated story about a men’s gay society like the mother / daughter one you just did. Then maybe somehow meld it all together. What a wonderful community that would be to live in. I think it would be hot especially with the way your mind thinks.

It was a good story, but there were too many people involved. I almost needed a scorecard to keep track.

Silkstockingslover & Rebecca's art is always a winner.

black femdom please.

what a horny story

Yet another fantastic story.

Fantastic ART work. Really brought out the finer points of the story.

As one of the comments notes, need a scorecard to keep track of who is who and who gets who.

Keep these stories cuming. Really fun to read.

Too much

I see what you mean about Rebecca's fantastic artwork, and you've done a great job of stitching together a story to connect the illustrations. You're. right -- it's a pretty choppy story that's best seen as more of a comic strip. The instant turns are, of course, unbelievable, but so is getting super powers from a radioactive spider - you've got to take it in the spirit it was meant.

EXCELLENT artwork, and it followed the storyline perfectly

Ms. Walker, you and Rebecca make a great team. Please keep working together ❤.

Nice blend of a great story teller and a great illustrator. Still waiting, with baited breath, for a sequel to your outstanding Family Fairys.

There is no last drawing???

i see some new Rebecca artwork here the ones with smartphones where did you get them?

This story was so HOT in every aspect. Love the art, very beautiful, extremely sexy! Thank you so much for sharing these sexy adventures with us!

I love these stories using Rebecca's drawings and I love the ay you embellish the stories that she had for the drawings as well, keep up the good work

Was interesting at first but then just got repetitive and boring. Some really misandrist crap this is. Turning all neighborhood women and girls into lesbians while the men are out. Yeah right!!!

seriously that moron needs to get a life, this story is amazing one of the best.

I’ve been exploring my bicurious side recently and this story is quite possibly the most seductive and sexy story I have ever read!! The thought of my bf and I living on lucky lane is my new fantasy 😍 part II??

Nah, didn't like it. Nothing -but- sex, most of it just bad sex, and predatory, and forced...rape, essentially. Started skimming to find anything that wasn't male fetishized fantasy and just gave up.

Such an incredible amount of sex...what can you say except.....MORE please.

Great story and the art work is surprisingly so freaking hot. Loved it!

I got lost in all of the characters, but the pictures made it fun. Got to admit I like a bit of male action, too.

Thanks for this story my shaved pussy was so wet, when reading your erotic stories' I have to sit on a towel with my favorite toys, Yum!

Speaking as a man, I LOVED the part about the husbands being put in cages and forced to watch their wives and daughters get fucked by other women. GOD how hot would that be!

The ending killed it for me. No need to put down the men who are working every day to support their families. I can’t believe that those women who like a strap on wouldn’t appreciate a warm dick as well as sapphic sex.

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We’re I one of the husbands in this tale, if they didn’t want a divorce, just include me in the club. Nature made us to fuck our wives & wives to fuck their husbands.

Bill S.

Love the artwork so freaking hot.....now I need to see some lesbian porn featuring fitness models.

Mmmmm yummnnmmy! What a shame places or ‘clubs’ like lucky lane don’t exist or do they cos I don’t know about them! lol but that’s Australia for you…….thx for sharing love yr writing so hot erotic af and yummy xxx

More actual detail of the seductions would have been appreciated. I could also have done without the cucking.

I'm no writer but u tried to hard u were all over the place to much going on 1 sec hot 2sec later lame

SS, you are the top, or ah the bottom as a writer. Your artwork is out standing. I'd love to sit down and talk with you about some questions I have.

Amber takes her study partner from biology to sucking huge cocks!

"5 stars" just isn't enough to rate this fantastic story!!!!

I'm really into incest, lesbian stranger and student sex with teacher, parent or neighbor.

HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The illustrations make this story even better.

Loved this story! Would love at the end of more of a cuckold/chastity theme. You did that briefly, but maybe some gay theme with the husbands while the lesbian women watched