All Comments on 'A Mother's Concern Ch. 08'

Start packing up and plan to move near her sons college

Thanks all who read and left comments, even if they were merely an expression of frustration. I wanted a slower burn than I read in most stories, and thought breaking it up over multiple chapters would help pace things with clear breaks, almost like a tv show v. a movie. I guess not all dug that and felt some "episodes" were boring/worthless. If I do again I'll keep that in mind and would need each chapter to have something worthwhile to keep the reader invested.

I did proofread / rewrite every chapter at least twice, noticed the tense issues and tried to correct them. Sorry no excuse for poor grammar, but just wanted to be clear that I tried.

I hope you found some aspects to enjoy even if you didn't like the story overall, not sure when I'll try another story but I'll try to internalize your feedback. Thanks for reading.

Liked this story but the sex scenes needed more info they were just too short 4 stars

Enjoyed this a lot… kept my interest and was very hot also

JT

Liked this series but the sexual part was lacking hope you contine 4 stars