All Comments on 'A Mother's Duty Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Very nice. Im hopong you continiue this.

MamalidoMamalidoalmost 4 years ago

This is very well written but im lucky i found it. Please use story tags such as futa on male so others eho have this fetish like me would be able to find it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic

I'm deeply enjoying the setting so far, especially the interesting harem/power dynamics. Only a couple of criticisms - a few typos threw me out of immersion and I would love (seriously, love) some more detail on the sex scenes. Keep up the great story!

KallamezKallamezalmost 4 years ago
Delicious

This story is delicious, and I can't wait to see it grow further. The only thing I suggest you do, for both ch1 and 2 is, like others said, add the futanari and futa on male tags, so other people can find this awesome story easily.

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Its not my real name, but you can call me Ludmith. The stories I post here are original works usually borne out of frustration with other peoples original works, often of the 'why isn't there more like this!?' variety. If my stories do well here, I'll probably try to sell them...

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