All Comments on 'A Mother's Lessons Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

So many places this could go. Please try to keep it to one new adventure per chapter, so they don't feel rushed and you can explore IN DETAIL.

For example, Chapters 1-3 could have been just that, three chapters. It felt like you were trying to get as much in as you could before the ending.

I understand that you want to grab the readers attention to keep them coming back. Just keep up the slower pace of chapter 4 and it's all good.

No kink is too kinky to try at least once. You never know what will flip your switch.

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