by PrimandPink
Loved the story. Loved the humor. The mechanics could be a little better. Looking forward to your next story.
" I know I've given both casual and professional handjobs better than this" - took all the affection and romance out of the story and made Mom into just another whore...
I don't like to say anything bad to early writers who haven't written many stories. In the future though, don't start by talking about bad acne, or anything gross. You don't want to make readers nauseous, then they don't want to continue reading.
'Loved your story, but some of it I just wasn't buying. A young man just doesn't get a hard on for his mother. At least I never did. Oedipus gouged his eyes out and he didn't even know what he'd done.
Mom and son bond over various things. Most moms would do anything for son. Somerimes giving handjob is the right thing to do.
This was a nice story but I only gave it a 4 all there was were a blow job and hand jobs you wrote nothing about their sex together just wrote a long weekend of sex