All Comments on 'A Naked Submissive Mother'

As always, thanks to everyone who's read this.

Much appreciated.

heyall

quick the ch 2 and 3 and ... excellent!

I like this story! I like where you can go with this. Looking forward to reading about their experiences and loving ways with each other. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Please continue this story with the son

Have mom be used by her son in front of dad / husband. Also, have son take Alejandra. Make her submissive to him.

A good start to this story, though it felt like you left something out it, not just his moms vagina, but that lack of connection if they did! Thank you for sharing this with us!

I love it the story line of mom and son

Sure wish I could have this much fun with my mother, or even one of her sisters or my wife's sister

Very good porn, if you like the premise, which I do.

this should continue for many chapters.

I enjoyed your story more than I expected. A bit more detail about her submissive nature would have improved the story. As it was, she was actually the dominant character with her son. Much more about her character regarding what she needs would make the story hotter.

Please do not make the son a 'Master' because most stories with a teenage Dom are rubbish/totally unbelievable. Personally, I'd make them both submissive to their Boss in ch 2 and the father a cuckold in ch 3.

What a story, what more do you want! How about some more chapters? Have a Boss, Mom and Son threesome. I like the detail you put in to it.

Hot start love to read more. Wish that was me also

Look forward to reading about the three some with the boss.

All i can say is PLEASE keep them cumming ha! ha!............... Thanks for the great read.

I came a lot reading this. More please.

Hope to see many more chapters with the submissive nature of the mother being explored more and her giving more and more ownership to her son.

Please continue

Excellent, another 5 star start. I would love to have more with the son and mom growing the relationship with lots of hot adventures.

Calls for more chapters. Thanks

A great start. Would love to see the son learn to be more dominant. This leads to him and the boss dominating his mom in an erotic threesome.

Thanks for another great story. Mom was only permitted to play around with another woman, or a family member who could be either male or female. Just out of curiosity, did she play around with any other family members in the past?

It will be good if you can make the son dominate the boss and his mom. His mom should ultimately leave the boss and be sub only to her son.

This make me cum a lot. More please.

Loved it! I'd ask for a followup chapter but I know you don't do those. Five stars and a favorite point!

I'd love to see future chapters of this story.

This could definitely use a followup to see where it takes us.

Would love to see her slowly pushed into doing things more publicly over time. Maybe at a family dinner, a park, a store, etc. She keeps insisting it has to be private, but you can tell she loves being risky too.

I could definately go for a sequal.

More chapters please.

10/10

Def need a follow up for this one, love that mommy slut

This is so hot and great,,, please more chapters

I'm thinking it won't be long before their Boss will be Pegging both of them at work. Like mother like son. Well done, let's have some more please!

Pure brilliance, a worthy 5 Star recipient. This definitely requires a second chapter.

You seemed to have captured something special here. Hope there is more to come

I gotta tell you, you are one of my favorite writers here,

The story lines, the writing itself, I just love it.

Would love to see this one continues.

I love how it flowed

great story!

This story has legs, continue with many more chapters with son using mom in so many ways and places. Like the other commenters, story flowed well and kept one interested until the end, but hopefully not the end. More please.

As always, you have written something to be very interesting to all. Very well thought out beginning with the setup all the way through to the last sentence.

If only all the people who call themselves writers could be half as good as you are, they would be successful in there chosen professions. Please continue this story till she is pregnant.

How about writing the boy taking control of the bitch of a boss. Show her what is like to be the submissive slut.

Yeah... Like for you to continue this story . Would be nice reading about the son making Alejandra his naked submissive slut. Making her take a hard cock up her ass rough & painful without lubrication!!! Spitting in on her. Spanking her and calling her a no good piece of shit. Think 3 or4. More ch.#

More please.

You hit another home run! A very sensual story from beginning to end. Yes, you could take this further. He needs to get even with the boss, or there could be a threesome develop with the father. Keep up the great work.

Great story. Five stars.

Thanks so much for an,enjoyable story..a great read.

Kept me hard the entire time. Too bad it had to end there (pun intended). 😀

I love submissive stories like this one!

That was a fantastic story...I would have loved to be be able to do that with my very beautiful and sexy mother! Hope you will write more stories like this in the future!

Wow great story. I sure wish my mom was like that. I would love for my mom to be my submissive to do with as I please. I have wanted to fuck my mother for years. She has been my main masterbation fantasy for a very long time. Now I have a different scenario to fantasize about when I masterbate. Thank you.

Very hot story.

The storyline was BRILLIANTLY conceived and MASTERFULLY crafted!

Writing was great, characters were believable, no grammar or spelling mistakes to distract from reading.

I must admit that I don't get dom/sub relationships but I can accept that they exist. Thank you for your hard work.

Great read, well organized

I bloody loved this story. Excellently written, incredibly sexy and it builds up really well to an awesome climax (giggity).

Would have loved a bit more of them actually fucking in their full on dom/sub relationship, maybe more of the son becoming more dominant. Also, would have loved a chapter of him and Alejandra both fucking her, that would be so hot.

But I'm very much nitpicking, and I've got loads more of your stories lined up to read, so I'm sure my desire for more incestuous depravity will be sated, just thought I'd lend my opinion.

Thanks

Truly well written, very believable, and sensual with compassion mixed in. I was hoping there would be a threesome with the boss and son dominating mom and all her holes.

Good storyline but I thought the story finished far too abruptly. Plus I was wondering just who was really the submissive the mother or the son. The son has a lot to learn on how to be a Dom.. still it was a good ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story

This is one of the best literotica-stories I've read. The story is told tenderly, poetically, with subtle psychologism, without rudeness. At the same time, a logical and non-trivial plot that avoids most of the clichés of pornographic literature. This is a real modern classic. I’m even sorry that the story ended, although I understand that the point has been put where it should be.

Loved the story. And the dom/sub context. With mom being submissive. Would love to read more about it. And have son and boss use her and also have dad around when son was domming mom.

great story

I loved its the dom/sub and unlike other stories it doesnt follow the over the top punishment type. It has a more caring and loving mood to it. Like you said in your story caring and trust are very important in dom/sub relationships. I do agree with other people comments that it need at least 1 more chapter where the so pays the manager back for allowing him to watch, by letting her to watch in the beginning and join in.

Have her naked under some thin dress while they play when the father is around

10 tars, not just 5. Son could have been a little more Dominate, although Mom's slowly allowing more ownership is cool. Perhaps invite her Boss for Dinner some night ?

Absolutely fucking wonderful, would love to read about her son fucking her cunt and pushing a butt plug up her ass. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Not enough submissive mother stories out there. I would have liked her to be more of a slave, but the way you have it works for her character. I also like how the father was taken into consideration, even if just in passing; always in these stories, he is dead or he left her. Thank you for such a refreshingly different story.

You wrote a story about an individual set of needs and the love that develops as two people learn to trust each other, communicate with each other, and become dependent on each other. Thanks. Your stories are so efficient. So very impressive to be able to write without having to tell too much. I'm a better reader for having read the work of a better writer.

You made a great story even better I wonder how many times this happens in the world these days

I did enjoy it thank you very much

Hot story. Would have liked to have seen the son take more ownership and dominance of her. After all, she is a submissive slut.

I truly enjoyed this mom being fucked by her son! Wow, I'd have ;oved to have this opportunity with my sexy Mom!!

And, this is a WONDERFUL STORY...one of trust, developing between mom and son, after he says he wants to "protect" her and his family.

And, dad...hhhuuummm....so cool!!

Would like to see another chapter to this!

Very Nice...BUTT a True Submissive Slut ALWAYS Cleans up Her Mater's Cock after Sex...

love it!

Great story, as usual. HeyAll is definitely the best writer on this site.

Very enjoyable, looking forward to more.

EXCELLENT

A beautifully descriptive tale, but as has been commented on a submissive slug would clean her master when he had finished with her.

One on the best stories I have read on Literotica.

I'm not even into the Mom/son thing but this story got me rock hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A tour de force!

GD that was hot

Fantastic story, I hope we are on the way to a 3so ee with Dad.

Dirty and hot...I love stories of slut moms and sons! Thanks

Loved it!

Needed another chapter but was good as is.

hot teenage boy fantasy

magical

Wonderful story! Keep writing i 'all keep reading

love it,

Hot story, but needs another chapter where they actually get dad involved (possibly a threesome).

SO HOT

That was fantastic. Oh if only In real life.your a great.stoy teller.luved the read5

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I loved it! I was living it I must have cum 5 times! The last time in the kitchen was my biggest cum shot ever! Wow great story!!

I like lt a lot my wife is a submissive slut with Ddd tits she gets a lot attention. She flirts after drinks and she finds a guy has a large cock she can’t resist . Usally am around but I know she had fucked my good friends her bosses a strangers

Really needs another few chapters to show more of how it progresses. Good story though.