All Comments on 'A Naughty Night's Walk'

by CosmicClaire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice story as it captures the feelings of being naked outside at night. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Short but sweet story. I'd like it better in the "illustrated" section and with those pictures you took!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Short and sweet, I like it (how about some of those pictures in the Illustrated section?)

DashDotDashDotover 2 years ago

Maybe once was enough, I thought that too at one time, I was very wrong.

storymacstorymacover 2 years ago

Thanks for sharing Claire. If you go out again, I'd like to know more about what you experience while walking in the woods. Do you step on anything squishy? Do any dry twigs snap? Do your legs brush against anything prickly? Do you smell anything earthy? Do you walk through a spider web? My body is super sensitized when I'm naked in the woods. Maybe yours is too.

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Hello, I'm from England, but enjoy a rural lifestyle. I much prefer living in a forest region rather than a major city. Good spelling, punctuation and grammar will help you keep my attention, I loathe text-speak, it feels like a vandalization of the English language. No...