All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

Lovelove LOVE the lead character, .. except for the massive boobs, but ohwell.

^_^

u shuld create a sequel. this was very good

Come on not another unfinished Flyer story. Please don't leave us in suspense. I loved both of your Flyer stories and can't wait for the next parts.

Very interesting Flyer story. 1st one I've read. Love the magic of your writing. A bit confusing every time you change venues. I've always wanted to have some magic at my control. Still working with smart thinking and bypassing authority.