All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

by StolenTurtle

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story

I'm not one who usually gets turned on my erotic words-being a guy i'm more a visual person but i gotta admit-this story turned me on!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Umh!

I honestly can say that this was the best and most well written story I have read on this site to date. Please write another one!

DanielOrmeDanielOrmeover 18 years ago
Outstanding first story

Believeable characters, lots of heat. Looking forward to more stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Makes my nether region tingle

Great story. Makes me wanna engage in sex RIGHT NOW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow thats the kind of love I want!!!

Thats the kind of love I want! I love this story its one I will read a few more times.

GuyJDGuyJDover 18 years ago
AWESOME STORY!!!

Great story and very well written. Oddly enough, I'm also in the middle of writing an interracial story of long time friends becoming lovers.

This was a great story for it had more romance in it then your typical "rape" or "humiliation" subjects.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Thank you for sharing your gift!!!

Please..please write more!!! I was touched by your story. Please write more....with a gift like yours you have to share.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
more please morer!!!

such a sweet honest love story , it definitely needs a part 2 !!!!would love to know what happens to them futher

asjahstrinaasjahstrinaabout 18 years ago
needs a part 2 !!!!

loved it !!!! so lovely .loved the romance in it .hope you dont leave us hanging ,would want to know where this relationship heads too(happy ending plz).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Where's the rest of it?

Left me wet and horny as hell. Where's the rest of the story??!!! It simply can't end there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fucking Awesome

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you....

wudelfinwudelfinalmost 18 years ago
now what!!!

that was intense. so I ask nicely once. Where the hell is the rest?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
And I will ask nicely twice...

Where the hell is the rest? Where the hell is the rest?

AWESOME STORY. I loved it. More BF/WM please!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOLY HELL....

OMG YOU HAVE TO HAVE MORE...PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS MORE

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
WHOA!

THAT was HOT!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
LOVED IT!

Every time I come to this site I HAVE to re-read this story.

It's the sexiest, most passionate story I've read here so far. I would love to see this story expanded and published.

It's simply excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
DAMN!

Oh hell no, you can't end this story here, there has to be more! OMG, I'm so wet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Please

I beg of you.

Continue, please!

For the sake of all your readers that you've made addicts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW!!!

Desperately awaiting the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
om.....g.

I'm not one to get all hornied up for these stories but DAMN! That was so hot, re-read it like 4 times and worked my fingers to death! Keep'em 'cummin'

knightofheartsknightofheartsover 15 years ago
Damn...

Some people write and some people WRITE. Congratulations on being the latter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
standing ovation

had to wake up first.....passed out....

Man! unreal. hope you have more stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Are You Serious

you are leaving me in the lurch. I am so wet and horny reading this, you have GOT to be kidding that there isn't more. I have to please myself and then fuck my hubby when he gets home!

cpm09cpm09over 14 years ago
Amazing!!

Bloody Hell! That was absolutely fantastic...you've got to write more about them!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

wow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Oh my goodness, it was amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
love this story!!!

It has been one of my favorites for years. I come back and read it every once in a while. i's always a turn on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
*****

One, two, three, four, five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
HOT

I really liked this story and well done for the British Comedy mention.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 13 years ago
Friends??

I loved the spin on friends, that were really meant to be together. good story, can we please get an update on this???

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh My GOSH!!!!

I loved the story. It was so kinky and erotic that even I wished that I had a friend like David. Thanks for sharing. ;)

VgheatVgheatover 12 years ago
Fire.

Hot as hell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
StolenTurtle,

This is the third time that I have read this story, but every time feels like the first. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You captivated me..

you captivated me from the very beginning. If you have a magic wand, please send a David my wayyyyyy.

fitandtrimladyfitandtrimladyalmost 11 years ago
also captivated

Wow, that was intense, hot and sexy. Nice from becoming to end on a great note. I look forward to reading your other stories. Well done with this interracial love story in the true sense.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
fitandtrimlady

This person is the same person who is banned on literotica, there previous moniker is fitandtrim. Beware of this person, cyber stalking of author and members.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WOW! WHERE CAN I FIND A FRIEND LIKE THAT!

I loved the character build up and the backstory of their friendship. The story was fast paced but not rushed. That is a short story that I can get with and a man I could definitely get with!

Wish I had a friend like David, he would make all my secret fantasies come true!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
DAMN

I would love a guy friend like that and then he would end up being my man. I would never let him go.

KittyOh48KittyOh48almost 10 years ago
Damn Good!

Wish this story was longer! It was Damn Good!

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 8 years ago
Awesome

Hooray ! Wow !

SatyrDickSatyrDick2 months ago

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

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