by StolenTurtle
I'm not one who usually gets turned on my erotic words-being a guy i'm more a visual person but i gotta admit-this story turned me on!!
I honestly can say that this was the best and most well written story I have read on this site to date. Please write another one!
Believeable characters, lots of heat. Looking forward to more stories from you.
Great story. Makes me wanna engage in sex RIGHT NOW!
Thats the kind of love I want! I love this story its one I will read a few more times.
Great story and very well written. Oddly enough, I'm also in the middle of writing an interracial story of long time friends becoming lovers.
This was a great story for it had more romance in it then your typical "rape" or "humiliation" subjects.
Please..please write more!!! I was touched by your story. Please write more....with a gift like yours you have to share.
such a sweet honest love story , it definitely needs a part 2 !!!!would love to know what happens to them futher
loved it !!!! so lovely .loved the romance in it .hope you dont leave us hanging ,would want to know where this relationship heads too(happy ending plz).
Left me wet and horny as hell. Where's the rest of the story??!!! It simply can't end there.
that was intense. so I ask nicely once. Where the hell is the rest?!
Where the hell is the rest? Where the hell is the rest?
AWESOME STORY. I loved it. More BF/WM please!!!!!!!!!
Every time I come to this site I HAVE to re-read this story.
It's the sexiest, most passionate story I've read here so far. I would love to see this story expanded and published.
It's simply excellent.
Oh hell no, you can't end this story here, there has to be more! OMG, I'm so wet!
I beg of you.
Continue, please!
For the sake of all your readers that you've made addicts.
I'm not one to get all hornied up for these stories but DAMN! That was so hot, re-read it like 4 times and worked my fingers to death! Keep'em 'cummin'
Some people write and some people WRITE. Congratulations on being the latter.
had to wake up first.....passed out....
Man! unreal. hope you have more stuff
you are leaving me in the lurch. I am so wet and horny reading this, you have GOT to be kidding that there isn't more. I have to please myself and then fuck my hubby when he gets home!
Bloody Hell! That was absolutely fantastic...you've got to write more about them!!!
It has been one of my favorites for years. I come back and read it every once in a while. i's always a turn on.
I really liked this story and well done for the British Comedy mention.
I loved the spin on friends, that were really meant to be together. good story, can we please get an update on this???
I loved the story. It was so kinky and erotic that even I wished that I had a friend like David. Thanks for sharing. ;)
This is the third time that I have read this story, but every time feels like the first. Great work.
you captivated me from the very beginning. If you have a magic wand, please send a David my wayyyyyy.
Wow, that was intense, hot and sexy. Nice from becoming to end on a great note. I look forward to reading your other stories. Well done with this interracial love story in the true sense.
This person is the same person who is banned on literotica, there previous moniker is fitandtrim. Beware of this person, cyber stalking of author and members.
I loved the character build up and the backstory of their friendship. The story was fast paced but not rushed. That is a short story that I can get with and a man I could definitely get with!
Wish I had a friend like David, he would make all my secret fantasies come true!
I would love a guy friend like that and then he would end up being my man. I would never let him go.