by bupbupbup
I really like this story so far. I usually wait until the end to comment, but the writing is so well done and the character development so good that I was pulled in immediately upon their meeting. Their story flows so well that even though there is a lot going on, it slows nothing down and in fact draws you in deeper. These characters are both amazing as well. Thank you for posting such a wonderful story. There is nothing quit as powerful as instant mutual attraction. Looking forward to reading more of the journey these wonderful young women have begun. Very well done I'll be looking watching for more rom you for sure.5 STARS ACROSS THE BOARD ON THESE! G
An excellent continuation. You get the pace right, and the character development is convincing. 5 stars from me xxxxx