by bupbupbup
Going a little over the top now with the porny dialogue. But they're so sexy and it's great that you emphasise the fun, the positive, the sheer joy of it.
Crazy, outlandish and fun - keep bringing us stories about hot women. Hope you have more to share. Love your imagination.
Still great writing and excellent characters another 5 stars from me. Would like to read more of these two.. thanks for your hard work and for posting. G