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Anonymousover 5 years agoEmma? Ben?
I thought the names of the characters were James & Ella. Why change to Ben & Emma?
Anonymousover 5 years agoCharacter's names changed
Good story, but quite a few typos and James is now Ben and Ella is now Emma. You could use an editor or proofreader. But I thought the story was erotic and interesting. I wish I could meet Adrian too.
greenbeardlk11 months agoWTF changed mid story from romance to gay male. gave it 1 star wish I could give it negative 10.
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