All Comments on 'A New Golf Partner and Hole in One'

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey8 months ago

5 Stars. Very nice.

Giorgio66EpzGiorgio66Epz8 months ago

I loved the way you depicted the characters as matures, it gets tiresome reading about the young all the time..lol Nearly retired my self I write from that prospective and it's refreshing to find other who do as well.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fun story. Please stick to past tense - switching spoils the flow.

HazzaGHazzaG8 months ago

Long live golf

Becaa57Becaa578 months ago

I liked this story, interesting twist that you not only get to have a lover, but you own her pussy too!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Just started golfing and I already had started fantasizing about encountering someone like this. Very nice.

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Nonjudgmental and will not criticize, real married dad with DDlg tendencies, currently I do not have a little. Enjoy writing erotically with women especially one who is capable of creative well written ideas compatible to mine or who challenges me to match her writing.