All Comments on 'A New Life'

Loved it! So fucking hot! Another MDM classic. Five stars and a favorite point!

Short but not particularly sweet. Just average I'm afraid. But I do enjoy most of your tales perhaps the next one will be more to my liking.

Exciting new life for the family. Would be nice to continue with their day to day ordinary life behind closed doors while the outside world looked highly of them as the pillar of the community.

WOW! Your story was a very good read! I hope you will continue telling us what happens to this family.

Good story. Well written. Needs a better editor to catch the misspellings and correct the grammar.

0 for 3 in one day

Too much cheating for my tastes. 1 star and I may need to reconsider your place in my favorite authors.

Holy Crap!!!

Incredible story. That family escalated from being wholesome to deviant very quickly. 5stars.

Great story hot and about the right length for this type. Well done indeed!

Cheers

SAGE

What happened to Cecilia and who is jenny

Would love it if you could hit restart and write the same story with more tease and greater length. All in all, it is your story and I do love the thought of family members fucking each other. A 4

Got sex but not a lot of backstory as to what led up to it.

God I love your stories their always so sensual and descriptive...I was so happy to see all the new stories you published on my homepage. You're an excellent storyteller I know if I want to cum to read one of your stories definitely my #1 author.

"Cecilia, or Sissy; was our first born."

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So, is there a third child or couldn't you keep track of your characters' names?

Incoherent at times but great for a fast cum.

Bill S.

Yeah, this author is pretty good. I have made one criticism, but overall he's certainly got my interest!! On his fourth story now.

Soooo gooood!!!

Awesome story though there was some mistakes still loved it!! You need too write more of this and see how the sex goes after their first time!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O.M.G.!!!!!

It was a ok story. You could of done better with discretion of the body and how it felt. There should of been more about the mom and dad/groupsex as the dad shove his cock into his daughter's son's cum filledbsisters pussy or there could of been dp and dpv action.

I'm enthusiastic about this story and his author. It is the first time I read a story in the original language. I'm German and so I knew only translated stories by this author at the german part of Lit., but I was fixed about the themes and the style of this. 5 stars for it. I'll be back here for sure.

really liked this too short family incest tale,,very erotic!!

It was ok, but cut very short. Basically two sex scenes, no anal, no knowledge of what happens next in their lives. Kind of a bummer.

Fabulous!

"A New Life:" - This story is nothing but raw, stroke-story sex--flavored and spiced up and sprinkled with a mixture of prurient incest sex!! The attempt at the story being of an incestuous flavor, failed. This is not, in any way, negative criticism, but what I first and foremost look for in incest/taboo genre stories

The author 'MountainDewMan' writes fabulous stories, of which I've so far read many of them!! This one, though, is beyond reality and believability, i.e., the family going, in one day, from being sexually conservative to the next day, being a radical, full-on progressive and liberal family of sex addicts.

The primary, and main ingredients of incest life and actions, is pure love, romance, respect and the reality that family, blood-kin members can and do fall in love. There is some basic human sexuality involved--like in ALL and every couple's relationships--but first and foremost is caring, love, respect. The fear that society and the laws must be of major concerns, which in turn minimizes the numbers that others should never, ever become aware of the familial incestuous nature of their affair and love! Secrecy must be adhered to by keeping all other family, friends, neighbors, society, etc., unaware and ignorant of their love, sexual life, and attempts at a normal family lifestyle--for obvious reasons..

Of course, a porn story is totally different. This story IS hot, sexually libido-driven, and fills my wheel-house satisfaction of Mother and Son, Father and Daughter, and Brother and Sister incest!!! At the end of the day, I love all those aspects of sex expression and fulfillment! However, the combination of a believable incest story fueling--i.e., being the foundation for--a stroke story is beyond realty and practicality in real life...and a good and great literary incest story.