All Comments on 'A New Life Pt. 04'

by EricaDoesNow

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88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I really like you are showing us that Melody is having fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I thought this was going to be one of those kidnapped and forced into prostitution but you have come up with something that presses all the buttons and I especially like how you show that Melody is having a great time while getting along with everyone and having a laugh or two along the way. I was concerned when the brothel was brought up along with being sold to cruel owners figuring that maybe this was going to be used against her to make sure she stays out and does what she is told. This has been an incredible read and I cannot wait to read more of your writing. Thanks for posting it.

tvlove007tvlove007about 1 year ago

Yes, she is so accepted and pleased. I think I too would love this life.

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