All Comments on 'A New Life Pt. 05'

My apologies for the late posting. I submitted it last week...or so I thought. Something went wrong and it didn't go through. After the 4th day of not seeing it, I looked, and it had saved as a draft. So, here it is, hope it entertains. Thanks to everyone who checked it out.

Erica, thank you for a very enjoyable short series. I found no major grammatical errors in a well crafted story. No one thinks that you are gong for the Pulitzer Prize but is there any reason why you would be excluded, well perhaps the topic, but I would content your stories are a public service and although no monetary prize the Gold Medal would be a nice award. A suggestion for Melody would be that Dan falls in love with her sweeps here off her feet and makes her his wife. After all she can take him. Thanks again and keep writing x West x

I love how I can see myself in Melody. I have always desired breasts of my own, with milk, would be a blessing, especially with a man or gurl milking them with their lips and toungs. I find my self craving a cock in my ass as well.

I really liked this Chapter!! You should post a picture of yourself. Do your breast produce milk?

I wish! It was a dream of mine, and when I saw videos of girls actually producing breast milk, I HAD to incorporate it in my story. Thanks!

Hi Erica, I have loved read Melody's story. Reading that her last trist was came from reality. Happened to you. I had to tell you that think I know the feeling you spoke of with one well two exceptions. It wasn't a real cock that got me there, but a 10" dildo and someone else was using it on me. That was also before I realized that I am a trans woman. At 61 no less. Well 63 now and have lost 200 pounds as a result of making that decision.

Hi, Teri, thank you. Congratulations on your journey!