by jamax
Very well done. I look forward to the rest of this one
You seemed to capture the often incongruous attitude of the first time swingers. There is generally one participant who is leading and one who is following. The dialog and attitude also seemed more realistic than most stories in this genre.
It was pretty good and did have a realistic feel. I think some charactor building would have gone a long way to make it better and more realistic.
Jackie
The story was good, the sex hot. But we need to know what will happen to them now. Will they be OK with what happened or will it destroy their marriage?
good story, the things the couple are talking about is what breaks us some marriages and ends swapping. this story is very realistic from that stand point.
They seemed to want to fuck each others spouses so much and seemed to love it so much that maybe they can enjoin in a foursome marriage and begin making babies with each other? This needs a second, third and maybe fourth chapters.
We'll see where it goes storywise but this scenario was very erotic. Everybody got pleasured.
playingcardcompany
Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters on this. Maybe they will create a utopian group family?
That's just about the way things happen. Our first time was with long term, close friends. Alcohol mellows any anxiety and endorphins fuel the lust.
Similarly after the first time, my wife also asked if I still loved her, and intimated that she only fucked him because my actions left her no choice. We swapped with that same couple many times and each time my wife blamed me for starting things, yet she never missed getting it on herself.
On the other hand, her inhibitions disappeared the moment she got hot for the husband of one of her school friends, which gave me an insight of what she may have felt on those other occasions.
Happy to report that our occasional swapping continued for years.I found it was best to follow her lead; i.e. when other men showed their interest in her, usually at my wife's instigation. We always talked about each experience to each other and did not cheat in the mean time.
All in the past now but we love reading of others experiences. We are still together after 45 years
Honest, all the little quirks & jealousies, like at the end, celebrating our humanity!!
Great story. I hope someday this will happen to my wife and I.
I would love to watch her being fucked