by princess_stacey
It's a nice start. However, you need an editor. Towards the end, you kept mixing up your pronouns. And Susan goes to San Francisco, then later said she went to Costa Rica. Did you get mixed up?
Very promising debut submission. Hope you don't rush into the sex in the next chapter and allow a bit of sexual tension to build. 5 stars and looking forward to the next instalment
Family nudism is great. We’re 3 generations of nudists in my family. And yes, erections are common, acceptable in my family.
Justin felt her rock hard election . . . Ooops.
Good story, nicely presented in a manner most men would relate with .
A lovely story looking forward to reading how the family develops in their new found freedom
Yes! Now that is the FAMILY way of doing it. I love it. Can't wait to hear more about this family getting into the naked way of living. Sure do hope they spend time in their back yard, soaking up the sun, enjoying life together. Keep writing, this story and MANY others. LOVE your style of writing so far!
Good story, love stories about family nudity, especially if one female member is big breasted.
I liked the story very much. There is a bit of a descrepancy regarding where the nudist resort is located. At first it was in San Francisco then it appears to be in Costa Rica.