by honeycolored11
"He had tortured her in high school. But now, she was beautiful and he sensed that she was the perfect woman for him." What an ass!
i adore the love-hate relationship they've got going on. your story is excellent, but they use too much profanity to seem sophisticated or mature. they sound like a couple of punks. but otherwise, it's fantastic
So you're gonna end it with her becoming his submissive?
Like she ate his shit when young and will do so 4ever?
Awh, your writing is good, but if so you're at best only predictable? Doesn't do anything for me except perhaps P* me off somewhat.
Cheers
Yoron
it will be worth the wait. I like both characters. you have given them depth. This series holds amazing promise.
If I could write this story I would make their relation even worse and maybe in chapter 5 or 6 better. I love bad boys. It's only a sugestion. Thank you very much for the great read, I'm eagerly waiting
This is very well done! I found myself on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to happen between Aiden and Charmion....I cant WAIT for the rest of the story!
Wow! How deliciously erotic!I would love to read more installments.
lots of great stuff coming from this one...keep up the good work and btw...excellent for first try...keep em coming. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
This story is shaping up to be pretty interesting. I wonderhow the dynamics between the two will shape their interactions. How will Aiden convince Charmion that she's his? I can't wait for the next chapter!