by verbotenwriter
A monumental achievement for Lit. I've read countless stories on here. This is not only one of my favorites for the year, but all time. One of the best stories of Lit. And one of the best Mom/Son series in a long time
Man, your first at bat on LIT, and you knocked a walk off grand slam winner out of the park. Epic first story. Now on to the next story you already entered!
This was a hell of a lot better than I expected. You don't see the harem type of story done well; this is a rare exception. Space Lasers is a good idea for a show as well. Someone call Netflix. And maybe also Harem House as an idea for a more adult show.
I am struggling to think of the last time a story on this site made me smile as often as this series. Like I said at the start: it is -bloody- rare to find characters in this genre who have such effortless and believable chemistry. Oftentimes there's an either-or tilt to whether it's the blood or the sexual relation that takes the foreground, but here they play in tandem in the same way the plot's played by an ensemble cast.
As a previous comment says: harems are hard to write with purpose, and the way they've all come together as a cohesive family is a HUGE feather in your cap. (Side note: the orgy itself is written refreshingly clearly.) This is one of the most deserved instances of marrying-your-own-family I've ever read—hopefully Intrusivan solves for the usual genetic gamble, because these kids deserve to succeed.
Once again, this was a brilliant overture. I will -definitely- be watching for your future works.
PS: It's not corruption, it's "lobbying". ;)
Absolutley fabulous bit of writing. The humor was well placed and relevant, and the relationships between all the characters were flawless and effortless to believe.
This was an awesome series wish you would have continued till the Doctor was pregnant and maybe mom again gave the series 5 stars
Thank you for such a lovely and beautiful story of finding true love 😍 🤗 😘 💕 💕 excellent writing as well made the characters real in my heart feeling what they did 😊
Awesome story, fun, sexy, and captivating. My only complaint is that I need like 36 more chapters.
Anyone else trying to figure out how to incorporate “caveman bonk” into their intimate vocabulary?