All Comments on 'A New Toy for Valentine's Day'

by TheEnigmaticCryptid

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walt555walt555about 1 year ago

I loved everything about it. I hope you add more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fucking amasing , more stories please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

awesome

OldGuy1946OldGuy1946about 1 year ago

I agree with Walt555. Would love to hear more about them. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The revelation that the husband was an object to be maneuvered into a position where he couldn't object to the wife's plan to blow up their shared life without telling him -- "Who are you to object to me moving 8,000 miles away for several years and whoring myself for career advancement? After all, you fucked my little sister; never mind that I was an enthusiastic participant pushing that outcome" -- surely made it better for all fans of sociopathic manipulation.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 year ago

Great writing style but plot lines ended in tangled mess. Wife announces she is leaving and will be fucking her boss and everything is fine? WTF? 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This story was excellent. Loved the couple of twists and the interplay between the three of them. I would love to read a follow up story,

ElectricBadgerElectricBadger12 months ago

Great story, hope to read more!

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