All Comments on 'A New Twist Ch. 01'

by rearentry45

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

More, Please! I am so hard...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Keep going!

Terrific and I hope for your sake it is a based on some truth.

HarryHaversackersHarryHaversackersalmost 13 years ago
Good, but...

I'm enjoying this so far, however I don't believe the sudden transformation of an otherwise vanilla wife is very realistic. You could have had her learn of her husband's kinks, and gradually gain interest, perhaps just to please him, until she discovers she's a serious kinkster herself. Or...something else.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 13 years ago
Why do they move to this so quickly...

...with not much discussion or intermediary sexual experimentation.? How do they get away with it with toddlers in the house? This can be the most provocative genre here if writers would slow down and build slowly and seriously.

rearentry45rearentry45almost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Thank you for the constructive feedback. In hindsight, I did get carried away early on.

nudemale4straponnudemale4straponover 12 years ago
Enjoyable story

Fun read. One notice: You may qant to have the wife drop off the kids and Gramdma's then tie up the hubby. A Mistress should never leave a Submissive alone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pretty good

Wow this was a good story. It's a good one and I gotta admit one of the better ones I've seen. So keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Whoa

Lucky guy

jleniljlenilabout 8 years ago
Excellent

This was very erotic. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lucky Man

Trying this with my wife at the moment but it’s all a bit one sided at the moment an only me trying wife not really trying so this is one lucky man ✨✨

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Doom

Be careful what you wish for. Women can so easily turn from kind, loving, gentle partners to sadistic, cruel and heartless bitches in a moment.

They say that power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

You need a safe word or signal (when you wear a ball gag) or things can so easily end up with permanent damage, disfigurement or a trip to the ER.

Try explaining that at the next PTA meeting !

AKChuckAKChuckalmost 4 years ago

Great communication between lovers. It's so important.

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