by XxPrinceAnonymousxX
You are wasting my time. This should be in the gay category. Mis filing this deliberately is really irritating and obnoxious
This was astounding. I hope there’s a part 3. But I wouldn’t have found it if I hadn’t searched your story list. I agree it should be under gay male, but the previous comment was out of line.
Wow! The descriptive sex insane. When I saw how big this was I had serious doubt, but what a knock out. You’re going to get hammered by some anonymous folks who didn’t pay attention to the sex free prequel, ignore it. Keep up the great work
I think I reached my "too much smut at once" point. The praise & degradation was a bit repetitive & I needed 3 reading sessions to finish this chapter.
Hoooooly shit. This blew my mind! Freakin amazing.
Three things. Yes, this belongs in the gay male category. I read the first chapter before this and didn’t even notice the category until the comments. If I didn’t like gay erotica I woulda been pissed. Second, I understood all the eyes rolling back in the head (they were certainly justified, lol), but you needed to mix up the description now and then. Third, the degradation/praise laid on Micah lacked creativity. Maybe you were saving all the best lines for Caelan, but everyone kept repeating the same things.