by Spencerfiction
There is a rewrite due out soon. As soon as I published it, a story that I wrote in 3 days, I realised that the story was still in its raw chronological state and needed an urgent rewrite, which should publish tomorrow.
a good idea, leave them in a cup but don't drink the water. Grate story!
It was submitted on or around 3rd March. Whether it was in place when you read it and commented, I really don't know.
I saw it now. Actually I like both versions (I downloaded the chronological one).
What a story. Glad I got around to seeing this.
Great story - very entertaining and suspenseful. Erotic description of loving
I was born in England in 52 to European parents but haven't lived there since 68, so I a kind of "cameo memory" of life at that time. For that reason, apart from the actual plot, I loved the setting and feel of your story. Thank you.