All Comments on 'A Night in the Campground'

That was a very good story

Will there be a sequel? A chapter 2?

I guess the night is over at the Campground, so the end of the story also. Good story and 5 stars.

Damn, that was one hell of a hot sexy story!!! Any chance of a Chapter 2???

This a cheeky and funny story. Well done! Camping is one of my favorite pastime. I need to go again real soon! Finn

very good

Great story, I agree it needs a Chapter 2.

Kinda interesting wonder how many times he can cum in one day..... four was pretty good for a 50 something... LOL.....

Fun read. 5 stars. Thank you.

Loved it! Follow-up chapter with the mom and daughter, maybe? Five stars and a favorite point!

What a sexy romp. Surprised that he managed it that many times in a day. Shame the girls just disappeared without a word, thought Tina might like another night t xplore her new sexuality. Definitely worth another chapter with Mom and daughter then he could run into the RV again.

5 ⛤

Well, can't agree with any of the comments so far. Unbelievable, somewhat juvenile, wank novel. In your dreams maybe? Yeah, Right, older women in the public shower just waiting for "their turn." Somebody just 'walking buy' who waits for a naked woman to walk up and masturbate? Three or four hotties across the way wanting to all bed the guy across the street? Almost any of the scenes alone would have been believable, but after a while, all I could say was "ah, come on, get real"

Loved it. Fantastic erotic fantasy. Some people want their fantasies grounded in reality. Too bad! I’l love to be able to cum ten times in an evening, and reading about it just plain fun. Thanks for writing it.

Glad to see that you have started back writing masterpieces. Hopefully when you get a chance, you'll make a sequel with the mother and daughter and whoever you feel to add to the party.

Nice story. Loved the way as soon as the hint of a lull, new characters are introduced, and seduced! I like your style. A pleasure to read. Keep 'em up!

This is a good story, far fetched as it is. I loved it. Kept my attention to as long one normally don't.

This needs a chapter 2

Great story, I would love to find a site like that. Just keep your imagination in top gear.

Another great tale… 6-stars again storyman 👍🏻

And that's it??

No follow up?

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Wow! What a hot romp! And without the romantic drama of some of your stories. This is just what I needed after finishing Cousins Reunion 2. I read it all in one go (well, with a couple of interruptions). I wish I could have wanked to it, but I'm at work (slow night) and there's a camera that could see me if I did.

A couple of minor technique notes. The first time it was said, Linda's sister's name was Sandy, but later it was Shelly. And Tina's name popped out of nowhere. Nobody ever said it, but suddenly he knew it. Other than that, I was surprised that he tried to kick Tina out of his tent after he'd been attracted to her earlier.

Still a great story. Follow up with counter girl and her mom would be nice, but I can understand you wanting to just plant the scenario and leave the details to the reader's imagination.

Most Literotica stories require some suspension of disbelief, but this one is over the top.

Sounds like fun, thanknyou.

Male midlife crises fantasy, related to 7 year itch delayed/rebound. 3-4 different women in a 24 hour period with condoms, blue pills, or suspected STD's is a hugh Hefner holiday. High maintenance of giant windmills seem less dangerous it seems.

Chances of anything like this happening are about nil. But the fantasy of it is about 100%. This was neatly woven, well told, and fun.