All Comments on 'A Night on the Town'

What a great story! So hot and wet. Even better than the teasing motif of its predecessor. YOU are such a gifted writer. So descriptive, great rhythm, great tension, just love the slow and steady build-ups, teasing each other to the precipice, one build up after another until...

Then you have the nerve to leave us with another cliffhanger. Only one question, why is this in Loving Wives instead of Erotic Couplings or one of the other categories? Elizabeth is playing with his imagination with her romances, she hasn't actually slept with anyone else.

Never mind, don't waste time answering my question. Just write the next HOT story!

xoxo,

Di

Again, very well written. Waiting for more....

You've crafted a fast-moving erotic tale that has the character of all great stories: the reader (at least this reader!) leans forward, wondering and anticipating what's next! Where are we going? I also really liked one of the several inbedded "sub plots" that points to what is almost an eternal question in human relationships. Namely, how do such ever-growing intimate relationships initially form and then prosper over time, rather than growing familiar, routine and ultimately stale? Then you also paid attention to the mystery of that particularly human trait: how the mental/emotional joins with the physical to produce the all-encompassing release and surrender to The Other.

Well done. Looking forward to the next installment! Many thanks!

Yeah anonymous, it was exiting, and that's all it had going for it.

liked this erotic loving tale,,well paced, and left us with a cliffhanger,,will she or wont she?