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by Uillceal

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UillcealUillcealalmost 15 years agoAuthor
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Need feed back for better writing. Keep in mind this is part of a larger story. Thanks, U.

kelly_kellykelly_kellyalmost 15 years ago
Very well done

I liked the story & I'm really looking forward to read more from you. One thing sweetheart, if you want feedbacks write a note at the beginning in your story. It makes a good impression. Keep writing girl you have lots of talent.

KOTKKOTKalmost 15 years ago
More.

Interesting story. I would love to,read more about them.

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