All Comments on 'A Night To Remember'

I was getting hot reading that. Got to the end and saw her name.. It's my name as well. Made me more crazy. Thanks!

LWG

I liked this story a lot and I will not let me hard on deminish with comments about the possibility of a few edits here and there. Nothing majr and nothing that effected the pure lust of the piece. I'll read your other one now then perhaps I'l send you a note via e-mail. Just keep writing.

You have talent. Your description is done very well in the third person narrative.

Keep writing!