All Comments on 'A Norwegian Lesson Pt. 01'

Always enjoyed trips to Wales, it's a beautiful setting for a beautiful coupling. Very well done, love how Karla lay beside them enjoying her own pleasure without interrupting theirs. Look forward to more when they get back to the hotel.

Wonderful! Hope Karla's man joins them and they have an amazing bisexual foursome!

Well told! And thank you so much for not mentioning a bra cup size. That alone distinguishes you from 9 out of 10 writers.

McClelland here. Thank you for your comments, which I found very encouraging given this is my first story. As mentioned, part 2 is coming. But first I wanted to explore the characters a little more, so Part 1 will soon be republished in 2 more variants, each retelling the story from either Anne's or Karla's perspective. I enjoyed writing these perspectives, hope you'll enjoy reading them...

Great start. On to the next two perspectives...

Looking forward to see what 'comes' next...

Great start