All Comments on 'A Not Boring Bus Ride'

I think it was a good story, but maybe could be continued by the bus driver taking no more passengers and fucking you too...followed by some old guys and maybe others.

Not very realistic. Not one passenger says to the bus driver, "there's people fucking on the bus" when they get off? What was happening was not discreet. Everyone would have noticed hands ziptied to the railing which would have drawn their eyes to he naked tits, panties on the floor and this man obviously thrusting his dick into her. And qhi finally cuts her down??

Yet another great story! Sure, it requires some suspension of disbelief. But with all the crazy, stupid stuff going on in the almost surreal, upended 'real world,' I found my disbelief readily and quite pleasurably suspended without all that much effort. As someone with my own shame and humiliation fetishes and fantasies, I've cum to value this author more and more. Such an insightful, cleverly imaginative writer! So terrific and prolific! Yet again, thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us.

Yeah, I enjoy your themes and the writing in your other stories, but the basic plot here is just not credible. I mean, I know this is fantasy and everything, but the premise is just too fantastical to truly enjoy.

One hell of a bus ride!!!!

This was so freaking hot. Like someone else said, you need to suspend disbelief for it, but it's so good when and if you do. I'm convinced most people who comment on fantasy stories that it was unbelievable just don't have an imagination or an open mind lol these people need to read stories tagged with "true story" or just get over themselves.

Maybe you could precursor your stories with "This is an alternate universe, very similar to ours" so people who don't like using their imagination can get off the bus, so to speak. (Pun kind of intended)

This was amazing, needs a sequel!!

Love the perspective of first person in this. The narrative is very hot, especially when she discovers the people on the bus have been watching. Very sexy

worth a sequel