All Comments on 'A Not Boring Bus Ride'

Ah, what a shame, she's shaved down there. Sorry, that's a BIG turn off for me. I seem to be on my own in thinking an adult women does not look sexy looking like a little girl between the legs. The dark (bikini trimmed) triangle is a naked woman. A slit is just, well, nothing really. Looks like she's wearing skin coloured panties. Otherwise it is brilliant, although I wish he'd left her knickers on for longer. Don't know why folk are so keen to get their knickers off. The site of a woman in her whites, or pinks I think is sexy (except thongs). At least make her visibly wet them first :) - R

worth a sequel

Love the perspective of first person in this. The narrative is very hot, especially when she discovers the people on the bus have been watching. Very sexy

This was amazing, needs a sequel!!

This was so freaking hot. Like someone else said, you need to suspend disbelief for it, but it's so good when and if you do. I'm convinced most people who comment on fantasy stories that it was unbelievable just don't have an imagination or an open mind lol these people need to read stories tagged with "true story" or just get over themselves.

Maybe you could precursor your stories with "This is an alternate universe, very similar to ours" so people who don't like using their imagination can get off the bus, so to speak. (Pun kind of intended)

One hell of a bus ride!!!!

Yeah, I enjoy your themes and the writing in your other stories, but the basic plot here is just not credible. I mean, I know this is fantasy and everything, but the premise is just too fantastical to truly enjoy.

Yet another great story! Sure, it requires some suspension of disbelief. But with all the crazy, stupid stuff going on in the almost surreal, upended 'real world,' I found my disbelief readily and quite pleasurably suspended without all that much effort. As someone with my own shame and humiliation fetishes and fantasies, I've cum to value this author more and more. Such an insightful, cleverly imaginative writer! So terrific and prolific! Yet again, thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us.

Not very realistic. Not one passenger says to the bus driver, "there's people fucking on the bus" when they get off? What was happening was not discreet. Everyone would have noticed hands ziptied to the railing which would have drawn their eyes to he naked tits, panties on the floor and this man obviously thrusting his dick into her. And qhi finally cuts her down??

I think it was a good story, but maybe could be continued by the bus driver taking no more passengers and fucking you too...followed by some old guys and maybe others.