All Comments on 'A Nun's Story Pt. 13'

by mjar65

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Rainyday493 over 2 years ago

I am really enjoying this series. Nicely raunchy and great subversion of the Catholic context.

However, some proofreading wouldn't hurt, several typos or missing words were enough to interrupt the flow.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

Isnt this the 2nd time you are posting this story ?

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...

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