All Comments on 'A Painful Experience'

YOU ARE THE VERY BEST. YOUR DETAILS ARE SO VERY VIVID AND MAKES ONE THINK THEY ARE APART OF THE ACTION.

I HAVE READ MANY OF THE THE STORIES HERE BUT THERE IS NO ONE AND I MEAN NO ONE THAT MAKES THE READER APART OF THE STORY. PLEAE KEEP UP THE GOOD STORIES. I HOPE THEY COME FROM PART OF YOUR LIFE. IF SO YOUR LOVERS ARE SO VERY LUCKY

I found "A Painful Experience" romantic, erotic, and very stimulating. Your writing is fresh and almost innocent. I loved it.

This seems to be the recollection of a very young girl(PIZZA! My all-time favorite food!And in the BATHTUB no less!!!)

And I absolutely believe that regardless of age, the gradual falling away of her innocence is a sexy and beautiful story. Diane is so in love with her "beau" that she has no other thoughts! And that reminds me of my girlfriends at "an earlier age" who were sexually in love with me (or in "passion" if you will) and simply wanted sex,sex,sex all the time, and could only think of how best to please me. I Loved Those Days!!!

This is a great collection of stories (Yes, Mathgirl, I read all of your stories); they need to be "followed through on" and carried out to their ends as individual stories. Diane "awakens" and this is an important time in her life. The choices she makes now will define her later.

I, for one am going to love reading about her!

I have really enjoyed all of your stories, but I truly believe this is your best! It is so exciting, at my age, to be transported back to my youth. I can't wait to get around to reading all of your other stories posted here; keep writing please.

...if it hurts, you probably aren't doing it right. Good story about an inexperienced young woman who painfully impales herself.