All Comments on 'A Peach-y Experience'

Another short that has all the earmarks of your writing style, including the teasing “fits and starts” the characterize your work. By “fits and starts” I mean you raise the erotic tension in a few sentences then insert a deflating line or two like “Alright I think we’re both ready now.” Suspect that is by design (?). Like your storylines a lot, characters as well developed as can be expected for length of piece, and the frustrating erotic tease has appeal. Would like to see you share a longer, erotically hot piece with your readers.