by KingsWoman
It is a good, erotic story, but I have to say the reading style, the performance is a bit, shall we say, heavy-handed. If your intention wsas to be parodic or funny, it should be reflected in the text. The text isn't comedic, so I'm not sure what you were trying to achieve.
Shame, as it's actually a sexy voice. Hope to hear more.
This is only my second audio story and I appreciate the feedback which is very helpful. I'm glad you like my voice.
Your voice is lovely, and your accent is wonderful. I love your enthusiasm as you speak, however the accentuation can sometimes be a bit much and detract from the feeling you'd otherwise convey. Huge potential here, though. I can't wait to hear what you do next.
beautiful accent and a filthy mind. That broad vocabulary should be illegal for such a dirty girl. So naughty and imaginative you have the the perfect formula for erotic stories. please continue your stories but don't change your style. Keaton
Even the ladies like to hear hot stories, like a BFF telling you her deepest darkest secrets. Completely enjoyable, classy, hot and naughty. What a great combination. You weave quite a story.
As I listened to your sexy voice, I couldn't help but slip my hand up my skirt, pull my thong aside, and finger myself to a wonderful orgasm, imagining that I was you (the subject in the story). How wonderful! I MUST listen to more of your stories.
I am so glad to hear women are enjoying my stories too. I'm going to upload one for us :) .
Another spunk inducing masterpiece KW. Beautifully written and narated as always.
If you keep getting headaches like that and missing parties your friends will get the wrong idea.
Excellent audio.