All Comments on 'A Personal Cocktail'

by FlashLindsay

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 6 years ago
Nicely done

This was an excellent first effort, in my opinion. In a short space you managed to convey aspects of the personalities of your two characters. Five stars from me. JB

chuckyboy86chuckyboy86over 5 years ago

I was hoping for a hand job but this ending was cool too.

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