All Comments on 'A Pirate's Captive Ch. 01'

This sounds so far good, but you need to make the next chapter longer. This was way to short. But so far what you started sounded good.

I'll be looking foward to the next chapter.

Would like to read more thank you.

but way to short, next time give us more

It was good and it was good that it was so short makes them BOYS want to come back for more and more

Keep up the good work

I always love pirate stories, I really am excited to see where you take this. Keep writing please.

but you could do with an editor, someone to trim the extra words. Try not to fit too much into one paragraph. Instead, let the story develop slowly- you don't need to cram in all the details at once.

A good start but it seemed silly that a wealthy family would send their daughter on a trip on a boat alone with no other female. They would have definitely sent a maid or something with her. I know it is probably more fun to have her be the only female captured buit it would have seemed more real to me if that detail had been changed. Heck, have the maid jump overboard to leave the girl the only female :P