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All Comments on 'A Place Beyond The Horizon Ch. 04'

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Ocean33Ocean33about 1 year ago

Love this series! Been hooked since the first chapter. I'm curious if Aidan and Rosa will ever have it out. Give him closure

KtYe3XKtYe3Xabout 1 year ago

Can't wait for the next part.

snarbozsnarbozabout 1 year ago

This segment is a bit slow

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Way too slow. You need to get to the Rosa/Aiden face to face to hold any interest for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well written but angst ridden.

Moonbat74Moonbat74about 1 year ago

Enjoying this a lot, but I think moving the plot along a bit quicker would help the story.

WoodencavWoodencavabout 1 year ago

Looking forward to the next chapter. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

JustloosenmrJustloosenmrabout 1 year ago

I'm intrigued to say the least, please not so long between chapters.

MimiRayMimiRayabout 1 year ago

This tale is drawing me in and keeping me... well, definitely looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why is this a repeat of chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What is it they once a cheat always been a cheat

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A Place Beyond The Horizon builds to a climax over the next four chapters as they land in Tokyo. If you want a sneak peak of new chapters, I'm publishing on Wattpad first: https://www.wattpad.com/story/334707193-a-place-beyond-the-horizon It was suggested that I try posting o...