All Comments on 'A Pledge of Purity Ch. 02'

It already had a good ending, with her saying they need a mattress liner. It didn't need the "fantasy" filler.

What color were her eyes?

Only negative in this story was Daddy slipping Monica's number in his wallet

Hot. Very well done.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.

I know that I'm in the minority here in the incest/ taboo category, but thanks for bringing up the pregnancy issue, and better because the 18yr old daughter brought it up. I tire hearing readers ask for the women in these stories to get pregnant.

The premise of the story was basically good. However, the puerile vernacular was a real put off. She sounded like a five year old. Glad good 'ol daddy had the decency to have had a vasectomy thus tormenting all those readers who seem to have a pregnancy fetish . . . .