All Comments on 'A Prince's Pride'

You used the title "succubus lord Marriolkvio". That should be "Incubus lord Marriolkvio".

It was an interesting one that's for sure, shame this guy was stupid enough to take on all of them at once. Arrogance really is his downfall isn't it. I suppose you'll be writing a alternative ending where he wins for the patreons eh?

I loved reading this, both because I'm fond of dopterines and also because while I was rooting for Chanterelle, who is a lovely demon-seducing weapon, I was still on the edge of my seat to see if she'd really pull it off. Needless to say, a scenario in which Marius succeeds in seducing her, or ends up breeding her stupid, would make for a wonderful Bad End.

First, there might be a Bad End for Elle—I'll be putting up a poll at the end of the month for what kind of Bad End, and from which story! If you want to vote, pledge at least a dollar a month here! https://patreon.com/gigglinggoblin

Oh, and yes, as a Succubus of Pride, Marius is definitively brought down by his arrogance. ;P

I dont know what to say. I mean, its a well written story, and certainly invoked a lot of emotion. But that emotion was... Bitter to be honest. I know this was a Demon prince, but being trapped in an illusion for all eternity? It sounds a bit like a fate worse than death. Maybe thats just me. Great piece of fiction, even if i could not enjoy the ending.