All Comments on 'A Private Beach'

Hymen can break from exercise or using tampons. Educate yourself.

Okay, I guess. Unfortunately there's a guy called Ashon who's written literally hundreds of similar stories, so it's very difficult to come up with something innovative. Perhaps have a go at a different topic.

Nor very original. I find it unbelievable that a girl who wants to say "No" won't do so, won't run away, doesn't shove him off, and instead cooperates with her rapist. To make this story better, I suggest you give the characters more personality, some characteristics that make them multi-dimensional, so that readers can relate to them as real people, instead of simply "the victim" and "the rapist".

It's fiction, and sexual fun fiction at that. It doesn't need to be 100% correct. I enjoyed the short story. Thanks for the read!

It was kinda hot but everything happened so fast and wasn't believable. When a stranger removes your clothing you will be quick to cover yourself and would at least flinch at his touch. I know it's fiction but its hard to get turned on when the story doesn't make sense.