All Comments on 'A Privileged Dog'

It's not safe to leave a puppy locked in a car for hours. I hope it was cool weather.

More, please. Fantastic start.

Loved the whole fresh story line of a puppy. Not just any puppy either which is a very different start to make this story a bit unique from others. Perhaps you can add snippets of how puppy got his start with his owner? Not every guy would be happy to see such a puppy and be so understanding. Maybe add a bit of anger in puppy if one of the guys starts to mistreat her, and the guy backs off? Then puppy gets a real lot of love from his owner after he protects her. A few more chapters would make a good story.

This will be made into a series. I have plans to make a few more, plus some other parts.