by asdorn
A fun idea. The brackets around the words made things a bit rough to read, interrupting the flow, but other than that... it was fun.
I'd certainly enjoy seeing more of her introduction into this new world and how it impacts her psyche.
This is really fun actually. I'd love to see a part two with some more kinky fun
The beginning is quite familiar, similiar to the ' This Plot is Bananas' Litrpg book methinks?
No offense meant.
It's very good, I would love to read more of this story. I can wait for a part 2.
How can her little brother be in line if you have to be within a week of turning 18 to go to the temple?