All Comments on 'A Public Service Message'

Good to see you writing again, this was bloody and a good read. 4****

Well, isn't that just peachy. Especially, the murder of black men who sleep with white married women. We can all get behind that, right? What a piece of garbage. Eat shit, motherfucker.

Now thats how you btb .

Freakin' Dexter of Literotica . Please make this a series .

I suppose that is the fantasy of every cucked husband. Suspension of disbelief is required.

No mercy for the cheaters. Adulterers beware, the Marriage Protector is alive and well. Soon you might not be. Yeah, isn't fiction great?

Five Stars

a fat cock smoked, a cornhole buggered, betrayed!

ticks most, but not all, boxes, 4 stars

Maybe Oppenheimer found out his wife was a cheating skank when he uttered that phrase from the Hindi God Shiva ? Hummm .

Not bad for an unhinged man's tale.

Actually might make a great plot for a movie or mini series. You have enough sympathy for the protagonist because his victims are somewhat unsympathetic.

Still cringe worthy though so darkly delicious. I would have liked more insight into the victims as well as the perpetrator though for a full on thriller.

almost humorous

Within my greater family of immediates, cousins & in laws there are 3 solicitors & whilst I like & enjoy their company, I've learnt to try not to engage them in discussing their " work ". One just become so arrogant & gloating over how he "works" the system to his & his client's benefit, one is just plain boring & the youngest (31yrs) is always moaning how she's treated in the male dominated firm & the huge number of hours she works ( average 65 - 70/ week ). I realise this has little to do with your story but it pleased me how William was able to screw over your legal system; don't agree with murder though. 4 ****

Your fingerprints are all over this one!

LOL

Wasn't crazy about the murders but "shit happens" and if it happens to cheaters...

Enjoyed the courtroom drama, best part of story.

More murder porn in Loving Wives. Butthurt male fantasies of death and vengeance. So erotic!

A couple of observations. “Equality” means murder as a reasonable and justifiable reaction to a dick entering a pussy. That’s a mindset you’d expect to find in any ISIS camp. Allahu Ahkbar, amiright?

Second, the narrator tells us he won’t bore us with the details of his wife, how they fell in love, his marriage, etc.. Of course not, because none of that is relevant to these simple-minded tales.

Yeah, it’s fiction, but how many LW readers wish that there really was an avenging (non) angel out there, applying summary justice to adulterers? Judge, jury and executioner, all in one, and no cheater ever knows when he’ll be the judged.

And you managed to upset swingerjoe, another bonus. He's probably crying in his basement now...

Okay, just to take seriously something that isn't for a moment:

Any DA who brings charges when there are witnesses who can testify that he WASN'T at the murder scene is going to be out of a job.

Even WITHOUT witnesses, the burden of proof is on the prosecution to prove that he WAS there, he doesn't have to prove that he wasn't.

There was no murder weapon, so no proof that he used one.

This case would never even get to trial.

I'm no expert on court procedure, but it seems to me that once the case was dismissed, he's not going to be shackled.

should have been posted under non-erotic. According to the definition posted under Loving Wives the story should be about "Married extra-materal fun: swinging and sharing". This story was not about any of things.

What a cleaver satirical little story. ... reminds me a bit of The Equalizer. Ok. Maybe the legal aspects wouldn't play out like that... but folks, to borrow and prostitute a movie line from John Wick... "It was just a fucking story!"

Okay people, let's deal with the courtroom part of this farce. The facts or lack there of in this case comes from case law where a person of acquaintance is now serving life in prison for a crime they knew he did not commit. But, since the guilty party, his older brother, who did the crime, was already dead and the DA had to convict someone. They convicted him just to make their "Quota" of convictions. (Yes, this is a real thing) They put a gag order on the witness that could prove he was not the perpetrator of the crime, and barred them from the courtroom during the trial as not to taint their case. This is the actual case that gave me the idea for the story. They had no weapon, not one eye witness, only circumstantial evidence and got their conviction because of his alleged ties to the gang his brother was in. Oh, and as stated... the Cops, the DA and the Judge all KNEW that he did not do the crime! So much for a fair and equal justice system in the U.S. The rest of the story is again a study in the cliche.

But, thank you for the visceral response. At least I know I made an emotional connection with my readers.

Myhands316.

but an entertaining, funny, sick (ha, ha).

Many Professionals should have a smile after reading this one...

Fun read really well written

this was one of the better stories i have seen in a while and i enjoyed it very much, thanks for being a man

... there was a good story in this catagory.

5/5

And sicker after reading some of the comments. Your self righteousness indicates that you need help. You can start by again reading John 3:16, which isn’t hard to connect to your pen name. I know, it’s only a story, but only a sick mind could conjure this up, and only sick minds could condone what it represents.

When all else fails... Become the Equalizer... lol

Enjoyed reading this a lot more than the usual garbage that finds its way to this category.

Funny as hell, loved the twist. Keep writing ; too many gay married men posting on this site. Love your work.

The fool is only happy if the wife dies. Shows just how fucked in the head he is. This is not erotic at all. But i’ll bet the troll came in his panties.

It was working, and I was reading, until you took it ugly. Then it became something to keep me from ever reading anything you have written, again, and earned the coveted two star award. I would have given it a one, but the two might stick. I'll come back in a month or two and if It gets swept, I'll replace it as often as need be. A pox on your house, sir.

That he is free after a trial and burden of proof. Then he becomes judge, jury and executioner. Moreover, he uses judge not lest ye be judged likewise in story without acknowledging that the judging and consequence is not ours to do and commit but that of the Lord. I still wonder why infidelity is a capitol crime for so many while other crimes that could be considered more horrendous are not.

Too bad people like you have no sense of justice, and that you are bothered by even a story about it. Too bad but this story only approaches balancing. And as they say "Duck the fuckers and let God sort them out."

puts me in mind of the movie the punisher. same concept just different targets.

i liked it

You are one of my favorite authors here and I think one of the most underrated

Not sure what type of messed up person gets off on this junk. You have be be a sociopath to enjoy this.

You said that this was justice. Question: in your mind, is adultery a capital offense?

Actually, that’s pretty much a question for everybody.

What the hell? That's a question? To whom? Fundamentalist wack-jobs? Barbarians? KKK members? Lynch mobs? Angry Australians? Cultists? That is NOT a question for the sane, only the criminally insane. Good God, I hope anyone answering in the affirmative can be found and locked up.

At least be creative enough to give me a native "bird" name.

shittingbird could be fun, friend of shitting with wolves and shit in his hair?😁

It seems that at least a couple LW readers would answer affirmatively. It’s an honest question.

The kind of story we need more of. Make SJ bleat like a raped goat. Love it.

A story that has Joe crying and Kimi screeching "murder porn" has to be a classic. Let's have more.

We have to suffer through 20 cuckold, slur wife or husband, swinger stories to get one good BTB. Then Swingerjoe, Kimi, and their 37 anonymous accounts start whining about murder. Can't win here.

Absolutely love it. Make it an ongoing series. You'll have plenty of readers. A lot of crying haters, but many, many readers will love it.

Thanks for the change of scenery.

I always like something different. Thanks for sharing.

There is a legion of closet cucks out here that won't even guess that you are a having a laugh at their expense, Write On!!!

There is an army of real cucks out there who won't get the fact that you are trying to pull them to the surface. Seems your lure is working, as many rise to the bait with their outrage that a husband could kill Jayvon for exercising his right to have any married White woman he desires. The very thought is shocking to our little cucky readers. They would prefer that a man sit and watch Jayvon work, thank him for his service, and clean up dear wifey. Really don't believe many American men would tolerate that situation. If we're in the closet, it's just to get the 12 ga., To give Jayvon his proper thanks. Ex wife is just collateral damage.

This story resonates with to many of the BTB crowd. How is double murder justified when a couple are cheating on there spouses. Sorry you sickos but this is not justice but first degree murder. They are other ways to get revenge or satisfaction but taking a human life because some people cheat is so against every law ever written.

You trolled the libs and cucks and I love it! Well written and enough bones of a good story, that you will capture many comments.

I watch those 48hrs and 20-20's and I am astounded at the number of convictions based on circumstantial evidence! I think you gotta have video, eye witness, forensic evidence or you cannot convict unless the accused has a long history of violent crime!

Prior crimes/convictions should be allowed and entered in evidence. Their is so much wrong with our legal system, the folks like the Innocence Project are doing great work in this area. Myhands, the man you referenced in your comments should reach out to those people.

As far as adultrey being a capital crime, I dont think it reaches that level, but it should be a crime and punished if adequate proof exists. Infidelity hurts people and families. It can destroy them. Takes a minimum of 3-5 yrs to become whole again, if ever. Their should be a punishment for that.

Only sick people would enjoy this

This is poorly written and edited. The author has no idea how trials, or mistrials, work. What repulsive nonsense.

Keep them coming. Loving the great vengeance and furious anger angle!!

The cruel BTB is interesting only, if the author explains well how the character avoided the prison. Every other story, where the author can not explain how the character avoided the prison that story becomes very annoying.

Examples from LW:

Flavian "Biggest and Best"

Mitchfren "Bailing Out"

BigK10 "The Fate of Her Lovers"

The story totally lampooned bible-thumping, know-it-all (but always get it wrong) rednecks. What a pathetic idiot the 'hero' is; a truly contemptible individual.

Someone is trying not to placate the troll by writing this.

It's true that laws and the "justice system" rarely achieve true justice. On the other hand, for an individual to assume that he or she can determine what is just in a situation they know very little about, then assume a mandate for executing that justice up to and including death, is akin to having a God complex. That way madness lies.

It is great to see you back in the saddle again. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thought it was great, but you probably wont get any atta - boys from the cum guzzlers

No this sucked

That might be why I laughed my ass off and gave it five stars.

god how i wish this was a true case

but it was a great fantasy

the courts protect the cheaters and actually even favor them so wishing there was some form of justice on these cheaters is heart warming although murder is wrong and our hero could just inflict a lot of pain instead of death and then the fantasy would be perfect

My first time reading this, and I am torn between liking the idea of punishing cheaters, but not liking the method. I think I would just settle for outing cheaters to their families, friends, jobs, and the community at large. Not being able to hide under their rocks, and.maintain their facade of respectability would be apt punishment.

loved it! We need this kind of justice.

Fools like to use the Literotica platform to spew their biased point of views 1-star.

The Punished for cheaters. What a great concept.

"First off, I will not bore you with how we met, fell in love, and all that trivial bullshit. " Thank you. Some writers will spend half the story talking about how they met, including every conversation, verbatim. No one needs to read that.

Thank you. This was fun, and a welcome break from the usually garbage posted in this section.

Two. @MCBS, I agree wholeheartedly.

In the addendum of the Cheater's Handbook. Maybe they should post it as a warning in a prelude, as in You Have Been Warned. Signed: BTW

... with the rant and the trial following, but the story went off the rails with the vigilante nonsense. It's a shame, I felt the guy was really quite brilliant planning to punish his slut wife and her asshole lover then finding ways out of his legal predicament. It was really cool that he even managed to earn the respect of the judge and that harridan of a DA as well. I was honestly hoping he'd grab Susan, leave the state and make a good life for himself with the gains from suing the state for ruining his life. This over the top, Boondock Saints-like vigilante plot thread just derailed the whole thing for me.

So, half and half, this story has the makings of a really good one with a sympathetic, relatable, if somewhat Machiavellian MC getting away with violent revenge but it goes too far into the implausible when he suddenly decides he's going to punish cheaters everywhere he goes. Seriously, he's a guy who moves around like a drifter, trying to dodge the law and stay as inconspicuous as possible. How's he even going to find out if people are actually cheating or not? Does he just eavesdrop on random people in bars then stalk them? I realize it's not supposed to be taken seriously but it just got too silly for me to enjoy anymore.

Is the extremely valuable function

of what is ironically called "loving wives" here on Lit.

I think there ought to be a separate category that isn't quite so oxymoronic.

Let the message be heard. Need more heroes like this guy. Boy would the cheating level go down.

Great story and I enjoyed

This guy is doing some wonderful work in getting grid of cheaters 2 at a time. If only.

He writes, "No unauthorized copying, reproduction or usages without the author's (that's me BTW) permission."

. . . no one would want to.

1 star - a really really bad idea.

Ick

What bible-thumping bullshit.

God save me. I love this story! A five star all the way!

Great story, made me smile⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Still funny.

like the court case and $ settlement part. the avenging of other cheaters is too much, but good and funny

I’ve been reading some of your stories today and I must admit I like your style.

The hero we need…

ZK

5 Star.........great fantasy...... oh if only there were more punishers in the cheating world.

The Punisher

1 star - violence always gets a single star rating - no matter how well written or intended.

After the first several paragraphs of immature rage, quit reading.

Needless to say, I don’t waste my time reading stories that begin with an immature attitude.

In reading the comments, some readers liked the story, not me.

If only divorce settlements were not so life destroying for the wronged husband...and so rewarding and lucrative that they even incentivize cheating for the wife, Things might be different.

If you can't recognise great tongue in cheek humour, don't read!

If you do, give it a five ad ae it a hall of fame humour classic

An Aa plus eagle stuff