All Comments on 'A Pyrrhic Victory'

This is really underrated. Very well-written!

This is really underrated. Very well-written!

This is really underrated. Very well-written!

What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed!

And I see why you chose Fetish as the category but I wonder if you'd see better ratings in Loving Wives. I read the whole thing hoping for a threesome, not cheating.

Not a convenient "Louis turns out to have had a vasectomy" ending. I can't imagine why this is rated so low except ironically, it speaks to real life more than the laughably contrived situations of so many stories here. It's very well written. The characters are real (OK, Andy is pretty bland). The story is credible (sort of). The sex is arousing (hey, it's Literotica, after all). What's disturbing is the outcome--just like the real world. The fact that this isn't a typical escapist, "let's suspend disbelief" story doesn't take away from its quality. Congrats! And keep writing.

Very good, enjoyed this.

“Betrayed by my body, betrayed by my brain.” “Andy and Louis looked enough alike.” Well, you’ve definitely portrayed the realism of a cheating woman unwilling to accept responsibility for her whoring accurately.