All Comments on 'A Question of Trust'

the best he should do is fwb till he finds ms right

He doesn't conclusively get back with her, he just fucks her. Maybe he takes it very slow, scopes her out for a good long time, maybe gets her email and phone passwords to check up on her shit. Maybe one day he'll trust her again

He dumped her because she was kissing his friend. Okay, but his ie ducked her and married her and now she’s less tainted? Now his friend can laugh at him as he is now getting her used pussy ass and mouth. Good deal?

Yeah right. Like any guy would say yes to that shit. She cheats on him with his best friend and wants him back. If she could date other men once in a while that would be great. Oh that’s all. Cuz when you get married you continue to date other people. He took care of his friend the way he should have but didn’t do the same to her. Why not? Before I threw her out I’d tune her ass up big time. The end

No way, he is respected, he has a lot of support .. No way should he sully himself, let her prove to be faithful to a different guy. Otherwise I guess he will be having his friends used up leftovers after all.

You’ll be sorry; most likely!

Poor expectations leads to poor results. Just only expecting to be in their bed and that is all she is expecting..... pretty short sighted, probably be a failure then.

How old are these people, do they all live on the edge? In trailer parks? Just can't quite see any good looking, quality woman only having the choice of one dickhead, irrespective of how many friends the ex is meant to have... especially an ex with an appalling judge of character... there are always others around, unless it's a one horse town, and even then there is this thing called moving to somewhere better.

Well I know understand how STI's get spread so easily. What sort of low down scumbag shoves a shit coated dick into a vagina. No that's just plain disgusting.

Poor response to conclude the story, suggests the writer is a man slut. Just wrong response/wrong answer and you are not to be trusted suggesting that is appropriate for any story. Pretty sad.

I think maybe I could take her back if the kiss happened like she said it did. But the marriage to Mark is the big hangup. But MAYBE just maybe it's understandable in the context of her having lost the love of her life, then all her friends. Heartbroken, lonely, and not thinking straight she married Mark. And even though they were married she never stopped thinking about the Rob. She brought him up so much Mark beat her.

I could consider taking her back

What happened about his accomodation whilst he was away.You just can't up and leave a place empty for eleven months?.

Duh, she married Mark. Only thing I try with Darcy is keeping her the fuck away from me.

Should’ve stayed in Alaska

A nice 'what if' story. As much as I hate not knowing, it was a good place to end the story. Fill in your own conclusion.

Stupid little boys type in CAPS.

ONCE A SLUT, ALWAYS A SLUT

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Unlike some, I don't consider the story to be without an ending. On the other hand there was absolutely no logical reason to let this girl back into his life. Perhaps no ending would have been an improvement.

I see the No Ending Brigade is running hot. For their benefit perhaps Literotica authors could just conclude with "They all lived happily every after."

Once a cheater, always a cheater.

You leave me hanging you get two stars, needs more, I am not a fan of stories with no endings.

Why not ask Mark?

It feels like a beginning of a story.

Why no ending? Boo..

No ending = No rating

I gave it 3 stars because I dont like the no effort short stories

Femdom agitprop,

Where is the rest? Her explanation of what happened is severely lacking. No ddoubt she will stray again.

i agree with Anonymous 2 months ago. What s/he said.

I thought he was engaged ... that commitment (and woman) never crossed his mind during his convoluted self-analysis ?

I think the author was confused, not the main character.

Nice story

And then what happened?

Maybe I read this wrong, but did they really get engaged three days after meeting each other?

Great start. No ending. Honestly though when liquornis involved AND he was allowing the two to dance like that without intervention, I am not sure why he didn't at least try to hear her side of the story. They lost 2 years. Even if he didn't fully believe her, it would h a very made him pause. They could have moved the wedding date. They could have gone to counseling to help with trust. Worst case get an ironclad pre-nuptial if they do get married. He knee she was a flirt and the friend is a hound dog and handsy. Yes she kissed the guy back while drunk but that isn't thr same as a full blown affair. I like that he intervened on the parking lot forcefully but I don't get the lack of confrontation. Instead he punches Mark and drops the mike and walks off stage. Huh? He feels justified when they get married like 8 months later but that was her feeling lonely and having no one to turn too with Mark constantly pushing at her with his obsessive fixation masquerading as love. Would have been better with an ending.

Although it has been a very good story so far, where is the next chapter? All it gets is 3 stars for no ending.

The story sucked because it wasn’t finished.

Another author who ran out of ideas half way through the story. Afraid to read anymore of his writings. It would waste more of my time.

Old Plain Bob is just Old Same Bob.

This feels utterly incomplete. Maybe because I have never felt any kind of love that would or could survive being betrayed by my fiance and best friend at the same time. I have no clue how this guy could want to have anything to do with some one willing to do that to him.

Thanks for your writing.

Idiot, both mc and author

Wait,,, I seem to be missing page 3...

old wimp just plain bob two darcy in the sad story .

Ftds

Good story; would've liked a part 2 to find out what happened. As always, good writing & told well. 4 stars -- Bob

Not your normal story. I have always admired your writing, but almost always hate your endings. Maybe you are finally seeing the light.

Worth a 5

Just another cuck pussy-whipped MC and skank female story

SWecond time for this story. He's in big trouble. He loves her. He thinks the question mark is trust. I think the real question is her impulse control. He better be cautious. All she has done so far is compare him to a major loser. Doubts with a capital D.

Another partial story. You have great ideas/story lines, but the few i have read so far seem incomplete. Where is FTDS when you need him?

What a different story!

It is just so logical. No strings, no marriage—just friends with benefits until he feels he can trust her.

Well done!

Bill S.

Disgusting !!!

If Mark Was

"Up there" on her list of the stupid things she's done, I'm dying to know just what exactly she's done that's higher up on that list. Signed: BTW

I like the plot and the indeterminate ending. This was very well done at every level - plot, character development (hard to do in such a short story), and technical execution.

IS that all there is???

author you blamed the victim for the crime please stop doing drugs

"Are you going to call her" Dee asked.

"Good lord no! Why would you even ask?"

"Because in a way you are responsible for what went on between the two of them."

like seriously she cheats and marrys the other cheater author stop the drug use its killin ur brain cells

This is how women know that..this guy is secretly a cuck !

I don't think he was a idiot breaking it up when they were in the back of the bar , he should of made a excuse to disappear and secretly watched where this would go.

Idiot cuck

no ending. they get back together married with 2 kids. mark comes back seducing the retard. and now he is paying alimony and child support. the end. yeah the rick and dee convo left a bad taste in my mouth. hope he doesnt interact with those ppl anymore

MARK, DARCY, RICHARD, DEE...ALL TOXIX BASTARDS...SEEMS LIKE PLAIN BOB IS A REAL LIFE CUCK

Ah true love often has a lot of ups and downs Really like it

I was liking it until the end. Didn't like the way it played out, didn't like the story being relatively unfinished. I also didn't like that he gave her no chance to explain before finishing throwing her out.

2 stars because of that; could've almost been a low 4.

Hates unfinished work. Don't deserve any star at all

As it stands, it's an absolute "TWOFT" (a Total Waste Of Fucking Time)!!! Okay, so it's unfinished- so WHY print just HALF-a-STORY, when it is NOT a stand-alone, part? What a TWOFT!!!!

Should have been 5 pages and finshed totally. Its well written and told well. There is a void that needs filled with this one. Too many loose ends.

Strangely unsatisfying.

FUCK THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Next chapter?

"A relationship could not work if every time you were apart you wondered what the other person might be doing." Good observation. So he turns her into an FWB and doesn't care, and then everyone dies from AIDS a few years later. I love a happy ending.

Guy is asking for horns...

Se is going to cheat again and again, until he becomes a sissy wimpy cuck.

Why would he do ANYTHING for Darcy? He can't trust her not to do something stupid. Christ she even married stupid. You sure this was a loving wives story??

Too short.

Trust, once broken is very difficult to regain.

Needs time and a lot of effort.

Could have evolved into something.

Needs a part-2

Just another pathetic RAAC story.

I know I'm repeating things I've said before, but she says "she wasn't thinking clearly," but knew enough to remove Mark's hand the second time he had it on her ass before sneaking off with Mark.

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"I didn't do what you think I did." - It's what he SAW her do!

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She got married awfully fast to someone that didn't mean anything to her.

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"there was never anything between Mark and me except what I thought was innocent flirting." - The initial ass-grabbing MIGHT be innocent flirting, but a second one not getting a slap, then sneaking out to make out isn't "innocent flirting."

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The fact that Rob didn't say anything about the ass-grabbing was meaningless. She showed that she KNEW it was wrong by her own actions.

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Definitely stick with the FWB, my money says that she'll bail within a year.

You need to finish this story. It seems you have serious problem in persistence and that is why all your stories are short. That is okay as long as they are finished. This one is not.

You are also hopelessly romantic in a vulgar way. You like to write about "love" a lot but all your effort to present us with the evidence of love is by characters relentlessly begging for a relationship while drowning in self destruction and vulgarities. This is a sort of juvenile approach and it is really worn out already since you did it so many times.

THIS MEDIOCRE WRITER ENDS MOST STORIES IN A SHITTY WAY....THE WIMP TAKES BACK THE CHEATING SLUT

this is stupid. i wasted my time on another JPB story. I think you write just enough decent stories-the great minority of your stories that I've read-that the intermittent reward cycle has captured me. i should say had captured. I'm done. you have no respect for your readers and have said as much. in returning the favor. bye

JPB

Based in on the stories you write, I think you have a fetish is simps.

Normally I would give a reconciliation 1 star but at least this story was realistic so 2 stars

Only a pussy and a wimpy cuck would think about letting a cheating whore back in his life. Just Plain Bob has lost his balls with yet another shitty RAAC story.

She cheats again with Mark.

One.of Bob's good ones, but he still won't write an ending.

Ok. I have been reading his stories for awhile. Most of them deal with a guy getting cheated on, and then taking the girl back. Self esteem, and pride in the male species, seems to be lacking. Any woman ( or man) who will make out with someone else, weeks away from getting married, is not a keeper. Cut your losses, and thank God you weren’t married and had kids, cause next time, it’s gonna get a lot more expensive!

Dude travels for long periods of time and she likes to flirt, and he caught her one. That’s not a good recipe.

being groped in public is just "flirting". Completely unconvincing, so just another RAAC

shell be feeding him her lovers leavings in short order .

nice little cuckold story

I guess he doesn't learn from his mistakes after all, keeping her picture in his wallet was too pathetic, she fucked and married the guy. Yet another RAAC story.

She was stupid at least twice, according to her own words.

She'll keep on being stupid. The saying is that it can't be cured.

Why would he stick his dick into the cesspool between her legs? She's just a cheating whore and he doesn't need that.

Nice story would have liked it to finish properly. One of the issues Darcy and Rob would have is that Rob is likely to imagine Mark having sex with Darcy when they were married. I've always wondered what it's like for two people getting together knowing that they've both had sex with other people. When the previous lovers were faceless people I guess it something that can be ignored but for Rob he would be able to visualise Mark fucking Darcy, Darcy sucking Mark's cock. Could he deal with that?

That situation would have been interesting to explore for the ending of the story. I don't think Rob would have been able to handle it.

I loved the story. I gave it 5 stars. I agree with Bob that the most important thing in a relationship is trust. After all, all Darcy did was let Mark put his hand on her rear end and kiss him in the parking lot. Rob could have handled this better. But I learned in the story that Darcy in a flirt. One of my rules going forward was for Darcy to flirt only with Rob and to control her drinking at all times. It is never a good excuse to blame your behavior on having too much to drink. That is bullshit. Also, i would never let Darcy dance with another guy. Never!!! Dancing is like sex. it is very sensual and very erotic. Or at least it can be. My wife and I are good dancers and we love going out dancing. But in our nearly fifty years together, she has not danced with another man and I have not danced with another woman. It works for us. I remember one night a friend of mine was sitting with his wife who is a great dancer. She saw my wife and me out on the dance floor. She was impressed and asked her husband if maybe she could dance with me. Her husband just turned to her and in a serious tone said, "No, his wife does not share!" And that is the truth!!!!

Things do have a way of working out. He'll figure it out. Good luck and good story! 5*~~ JBE

Good ending. Never trust her again. Just use her... but keep Juanita around too.

Lame.

No ending

It is logical to think that Rob would understand it meant nothing after she was caught cheating when she married Mark just 8 months later. The church, the expensive wedding, the honeymoon with Mark, were all certain to convince her ex-fiancee that she loved him and not her new spouse.

Great story, not so great without and ending. Where is the rest?

For those of you who do not understand "Cuckold." You have to be an active participant in it. If she is cheating on you and you find out and leave. You are not a cuckold.

You are brain dead or a woman to have him even think about taking that scan back. Puke on this ending. Dee is a lose to taking her side, her husband better keep an eye on her.

Nope. Just engaged...

As far as we know (from the story), they just flirted and kissed.

3*

Mark still made him a cuckold.

I'm not sure what to think. Her failure was not huge, but it was real. She really wasn't mature enough for marriage. Maybe that changed? She seems to understand what she did. Whether or not to take a chance is a tough call, but making her work for it is a given. Interesting story. You got me thinking.

YEP-even getting together with the prick once -no excuses means dont marry the bitch-re comments about unrealistic-people are crazy-just look at politics US where people are arguing about and taking sides when both have contributed to the coming massive crash