All Comments on 'A Rainy Night in Texas Ch. 01'

Did she never pull his t-shirt off? And does the sexy, mature David have a bit of chest hair for that sexy masculine chest?

He now has a hit bit of like cunt to fuck whenever he likes; she might try and put a stop to it but if he tells her husband and daughter she would be branded a slut forever

Excellent build up and definitely more believable than most. Please continue

Seriously, well done.

Despite what you think - when she/he says stop - you stop

Sexy, I enjoyed it.

The sunbathing/pranking episode needed more thought. It should have supported the story more by emphasizing her desirability rather than how irritatingly juvenile the boys were.

The proofreading was inadequate which gives a poor impression.

Make her Pregnant please.

Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

There were some many grammatical mistakes in the first few paragraphs, I couldn't get to the meat of the story. Do us all a favor....get an editor and try again.

physician, heal thyself:

You need an editor

There were some many grammatical mistakes in the first few paragraphs, I couldn't get to the meat of the story. Do us all a favor....get an editor and try again.

what hoo haa. first he's drining wine with her, then beer not to mention a few word missing that distort the story and leave one pondering.

Get an editor, and the TBC is third grade stuff. We know you've ended with your last period.

Certainly not consentual.

It could use some editing and polishing, but an interesting start... Let’s hope that mother is fertile (maybe husband had the ‘snip’?), and daughter too. I’d love to see mother pregnant as a result, with daughter turning up that way after her and mom share her boyfriend.

I can think of many scenarios that you can use that dont require rape.

Non consent is non consent

She thought one glass of wine would not hurt him. But then he was suddenly drinking a beer. Hmmm. Minor detail but noticeable.

Kristine thought it over and decided that one glass of wine would be okay.

And here he was now, in Ms. K's kitchen drinking a beer with her

wish you would keep going. they should get comfortable and suck and fuck some more.

Bring on #2 #3 #4 and more

Hope she got pregnant I know did mygirl friends mom zametime did girl had threesome both had kid of min them

My friends mom was very pretty. One time I came to visit because we were going to a friday night high school game. But, he his dad and siblings had already left. Only his mom remained at home. Stuck around and spoke with her for about an hour. She was very sure of herself and always was the boss of the house. One thing led to another and we wrestled on the front room couch. She lost and we had a great F*ck session. Had to be a little forceful at first. But, she later told me she loved it. It was the first time she had been dominated to do something she didn't think she wanted to do. Unfortunately it was a one time thing. But still have fond memories.