All Comments on 'A Randy Retirement Pt. 22: Ellie Ch. 01'

Wonderful story telling from the author with the latest chapter in this great romantic saga. Excellent characters and a strong story line are highlights here. The wait for this latest chapter has been well worth it. Five stars.

Wonderful Chapter with a balanced Mix of Story and Action.

This is the life I want, but instead I guess I'll have to settle for reading about it.

Hurry up with part 2 please.

I'm sure you've noticed, but on Literoticas author page ARR Pt 22: Ellie & Mina Ch. 02 appears before this story, so if you're reading them in order of that page you get that one before this chapter...