All Comments on 'A Rear Window'

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sirhugssirhugsalmost 4 years ago
worthy of a "5" plus

Ticks off all the boxes:

clever title (can never go wrong with Hitchcock homage)- check

competent spelling and grammar- check

likeable characters (and a bonus PYT, my fave)- check

able to suspend any disbelief- check

a sense of fun- check

loads of natural sounding dialogue- check

even bigger loads of explosive sex- double check

left me wanting more- check

Too bad "5" is the highest possible score- that many check-marks cries out for bonus points.

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 4 years ago

Do their rooms face North by Northwest? Fun story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I can relate to this story and really enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading more. Hope to see more from you and looking forward to reading more.

baulloyder68baulloyder68almost 4 years ago
Guess What Happens Next

Honey, this evening I don't have to work so we can watch a nice movie and I'll pop some corn and we can just cuddle. We will have the night all to ourselves.

Still a Five*****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Brafisto!

Del moy selabri constabli brafisto!

El uchi conaftico moy abri constablo.

Cona abri del constable much festa amecro.

Brafisto.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 3 years ago

Busted, but it would seem the minx has more in mind. Had a similar experience except for the meeting up part, but some nice mutual masturbation. Brought back some good memories. Shame about the wife, know all about that too.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

@TheSleepingKing dude its time to wake up and finish the story xD

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Happy to be sharing stories people enjoy reading. Enjoy reading stories other people like to share. Story suggestions are welcome. As is conversation. If I have a character you like, what mischief should they get up to next?