All Comments on 'A Recruiting Visit to Remember'

I too was a bi collage football player and loved this story. Thank you.

Great story, just a little criticism, condoms are a turn-off and where did the cum go?

Great 1st story!

Well done man. Great story. You have a gift. Keep on writing for us

A rather good effort for your first venture! Keep up your writing craft!

I like Tyler and Alex -- and maybe as they mature a bit, maybe Tyler can develop a bit of chest hair for his muscular body. I went to school with a number of well-built, muscular and masculine football flayers -- and any number of them with bog cocks, hairy chests, abs, thighs and forearms -- a very sexy sight to behold.

Great story and very hot sex. Hope you write more. Perhaps these two guys next year when Tyler enrolls. (You used "waste" when you meant "waist" but overall the word usage was much better than many on this site). cp

You should write more about this character. Would even love to read about him and Adam! Hopefully its not a one-off the character feels lived in.

Hope there are more chapters. These boys should become lovers the next school year.

@Dylthompson840 I think you just sparked a new story idea. hehe

@Straycatndc OMG i forgot to talk about the cum. fuuuuck. TY for pointing it out. I'll def make sure to write about that in the next stories. Cant leave out the best part haha

Great ending I forgive you that coach’s son did not clean top’s cock. A good bottom always cleans your cock after you breed him.

As I have submitted my next stories I just wanted to come back and say thank you to everyone who rated and commented. No matter if it was praise or criticism I took all your comments to heart and I know in the future it will make me a better writer. This is a hobby I hope to continue and I hope you all enjoy my ideas and content.

Just wasted time I will never get back by following a thread from LW. 1☆

Can't wait to see what Tyler and Alex get up to next!